Hi Lakshay,

Just opted in to download your video.

I'm a newbie and hope to learn from your experience.

I assume your LCP is your landing page, about which you ask for feedback.

I suggest you pull it up on screen and just let your eyes rest on it for a while. You'll notice a couple of things immediately.

The two sidebars with repeating logo/watermark pull the eyes away from the central column where the all valuable copy is located. I suggest you want the opposite effect, i.e., to encourage the reader's eyes to rest comfortably and glide down the center column.

To do so, lighten the sidebars... a lot, and get rid of the watermarks. They distract from and compete with your sales message.

I would also use a set font rather than the handwriting, given that your market is online business people. The design of any page must create rapport with your intended audience or it will be ignored.

Hope this is helpful,
Carroll