Hey Stella,

Please forgive me but I am going to take your pages apart piece by piece describing what I think is wrong. This my opinion and I hope it can help you.

First of all the copy is very weak, you need to proofread everything.
You put different in the headline instead of "difference."

You need some sort of clear niche, remember many partners here deal with internet marketing products, "work from home" products, and similar things. You are giving away books on how to have a good interview and continue or get a 9-5 job, your offers seem a bit counterproductive.

I also think putting the cents amount of the products there doesn't help much.

Also to really understand what the page is about, you have to read every word, which frankly I did not the first time through, and many people do not either. You need to suck people in better with a catchier headline, try using numbers. Maybe "How A (insert occupation and/age) can help you survive the recession and not be of the (number) people who have lost their jobs and any hope of a happy christmas" its not anything great but its a starting point.

Of course also make a name for yourself.

I think you should use a capture page first instead of jvmanager software, the products can just be on a regular page without a need to login. Update the page when you add downloads.

Honestly, the third testimonial is weird, the guy talks about sex, not really selling material. Sure sex sells, but this isn't what I mean.

I think after the optin page you should lead directly to the sales page, then have an upsell.

Lets get to the sales page...

You should put the headline in all red. Include a false time constraint like "one time offer" or "you will never see this offer again" there are even scripts that will include a timer for you. There are also coupon scripts that will show a higher price by the check out button and have the option of entering a coupon code (given to everyone on the page, but you say its only if they order now, or by midnight tonight) and that would lower it to the sale price.

The upsell can be a few more books in a similar niche, to "complete their collection" the price can either go up or down, I recommend down since this is your first product. Also you want to continuously show that you overdeliver.

Now lets get to the real problem why nobody is a JV partner. The price is only $8, these gurus who make thousands daily would profit a meager $6.40 on your offer. The price is way to low to offer any real incentive. Alsdo what are you trying to accomplish. All you can really gain here are random buyer leads, nothing targeted that you can mail to at a later time.

The sales page has no testimonials, or product reviews, by default almost saying "please be my first customer."

There is no other way to say this, but the product selection is horrendous. They are all different topics that appeal to almost completely different niches. Sorry to say but I would consider you lucky to have more than 10 sales.

Also your no thanks sentence is to out there, put it some lines below, and make it black like regular text. You should talk about every ebook in the package, what if someone has no interest in any of those topics, but they are madly obssessed with one of the other products.

Ok here is where I show you how to make this work.

From the get go, use an optin page with just a headline, subheadline, a short paragraph then some bullet points. Give away 1 maybe 2 ebooks, but sell the rest. Either immdiately sell the first package, include 5-10 of the products on your current sales page, but with info on all of them. Offer plr rights oe resale rights if you can, and sell this as a plr package, that I think is your best and seemingly only bet. This will not work jv's so just use this stuff to build a small list.

Upsell/downsell the rest of the complete package, also with plr or resale rights. Also you state some questions that people may have, but you dont answer them, you should have a faq section on the sales page, something short. Only necessary on the first salesletter then mention on the up/downsell that the same rules apply.

Honestly I suggest you target a specific niche and get products in that niche specificaly then go about the steps I mention above. I hope this helps, yay for my first post.

Sylvan Noel