First Affiliate Program - Opinion on this webpage Please....

[Tim Prince]

Appreciate input on this page from all you pros here!

Thanks,

www.massagelaunch.com/affiliates.html

Tim

[Dennis Severt]

Hi,

Well I have taken a look at it and if I where you I changed a few things.

Make the title more excited.
And people want to read it in 1 time, otherwise they close their browser.
Then your title is to big. It's just not attractive enough (sorry)
Look here for an example of a good site: http://www.keywordelite.com
In the title you must always have things like what the offer can do for the costumer.
Not things like: Here's An Easy Way To Make A Bundle Of Extra Cash Quickly"
But something like: Make extra cash with ............
People want to read the good!
Then you have to use a nicer lettertype and bold up some things to get the attention of the reader.
If you can, get more testimonials.
People love to read success stories.

Well let me know what you think of my ideas and I'd love to stay in contact to hear how the conversion is doing after some changes...

Good luck!

Dennis

[Jennifer Hunt]

Tim,
I didn't have time to read the entire page - but, I agree the headline needs a little work. What about something more like this:
"Want to Make a Bundle of Cash With Your Massage Therapist List?"
Ask a question the reader will say yes to...

That's my quick thought - for what it is worth.
Jenni