Okay here comes the brutal honesty, I think I may have stayed a few seconds longer than he did, but not much longer. Asking for marketing advice isn't always nice and you've got to take it how it's mean't to be, to HELP YOU in the long run.

Put your shirt on, there's nothing worse than seeing someone half naked in a video, trying to talk to ME about making money, I know how to make money, so why do I need you?

Are you that broke that you can't afford a shirt? (that's what the video screams). And hey you're not The Rock, VinDiesel or even Stone Cold Steve Austin thus not making you "no shirt worthy". Big turn off from a ladies perspective.

If you knew the fan was going to be annoying why would you have it on? Makes no sense!

Your lighting sucks, you look like you're in some basement that is about to have the ceiling cave in.

You've got glasses on, a hat on and poor lighting, thus not giving your audience the ability to see your face (get rid of the hat, fix your hair). And since the majority of communication is done via body language, you've eliminated most of it with people's inability to see your facial expressions clearly.


That's about all I've got, because I couldn't watch it anymore.

P.S. if it makes you feel better, I once got reemed out by Terry Dean when he critiqued one of my sites a long time ago and it was WAY worse than this