Hi Justin
I also think you have done well to get where you have so far. My first impression was that the red text right at the top of the page was hard on the eyes and it did make my eyes go a bit blurry.

The page itself I feel is a too long at first I thought I had directly clicked on to the sales page. You have to remember that if you have say used an article to link them to this page then your visitor has already read an article 300 - 400 words long, They then have to plough through your page, and then they have to read through the long sales page.

Your page should be fairly short and to the point giving a short review of the product but also include something negative about it as well. You only need to have a couple of links to the sales page that way your visitor is not going to be to tired by the time they reach the sales page. Let the sales page sell the product your job is to create a quick positive feeling to the potential buyer about the product.