First of all well done for getting this far, the site looks professional but the copy in black was too long, none of it was highlighted and I am not sure if visitors would read it? You really do have to grab attention and encourage visitors to read on.

There was no sense or urgency and call to action, a must to get buyers.

Like one of the other commenters I am not an expert but I could be a customer so on that basis I hope that qualfies me to make the comments.

Hope it helps. Becky