Opinion Wanted on My New Site...

[Peteman]

Hi,

I have recently launched a new product, and I wonder what peoples reaction/opinion to the copy (particularly the headline and intro) and also what peoples reaction to the product is. I have tried to veer away from the ever so popular "Earn £1000's..." style headline.

If anyone wants to kill some time and have a look and put up some opinions (be as specific and honest as you can) I would be very greatful!

The website is: www.theebaymanual.co.uk

Please Note: This is not a plug for my website, I am simply looking for help with my copy ;D.

Many Thanks

Pete

[charleskirkland]

Hello

First thing that I would do is drop the adsense links at the bottom.

Add the TESTIMONIALS and FAQ in to the sales letter. The more they have to click around the less they will buy.

Go to http://productlaunchformula.com/ and look at the sales letter after the squizee page. It may give you lots of ideas that you could use.

Thanks
Charles

[Cy Price]

Hey Pete,

I took a quick look around and agree with Charles' recommendations.

Bring your testimonials to the sales letter and highlight them. Buyers do read them :)

Good Luck,

Cy

[Peteman]

Thanks so much for taking the time to look and the comments guys!